24 January 2012

Foretell better days ahead

It feels as if there is nothing but a dark cloud above my head.
I am craving the sunlight.
I need some good news to brighten my day?
Where is the day that they promised me?
When the better days will come?

p.s. This is my first-time attempt in poetry writing.


Lotus said...

We need to rise above those clouds, easier said than done :)

As for the poem, I like this general writing advise of "paying attention to details and specifics, and incorporating simple events and observations into writing." I think it brings down our writings into earth :)

Thanks for sharing your poem and keep writing creatively!

Grumpy smurf said...

I like it! Just keep writing azizam (and keep sharing ;))
Love U